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Saturday 24 January 2015

Computer Forensic Job

TL 18 Lorong Mulia
Jalan Pasar
86400 Parit Raja
Johor

29 January 2015

Unit No 23A-06, Level 23A
Menara Landmark, No. 12
Jalan Ngee Heng
80000 Johor Bahru, Johor
Tel: (60) 7 221 3285

 Dear Sir/Madam,

APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF AN COMPUTER FORENSIC

 Having Come To Know That There Is A Vacancy In Your Company For The Work That I Want To Ask The Office Near You.I submit My Application To You For Your Consideration.

I Heard So Much About Your Rapidly Growing Company And I Would Consider It A Privilege To Work With You.I Hope You Will Give Me the Opportunity To Interview To Convince You Of My Suitability As Your Employees In You Company.

If I Am Considered For The Job, I Shall Be Glad To Attend An Interview At Any Time Convenient To You.

Your Faithfully

afiq

Muhd Afiq Bin Bahrin
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15 comments :

  1. Unknown5 February 2015 at 04:11

    Your Faithfully must be Yours Faithfully .... ☺and why each of your word must be capital letter ?

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  2. Unknown5 February 2015 at 07:49

    i think nothing else to comment because Qeyla Abd Rahman have comment what i want to say.. but you need to improve your english makesure don't do grammar mistaken again

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  3. repair phone pantai dalam kuala lumpur8 February 2015 at 02:58

    at the end of your Yours faitfully u have put in comma

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  4. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:00

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  5. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:03

    Your Faithfully should be Yours Faithfully

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  6. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:52

    Hurmmm...your letter is good but only the closing its not perfect

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  7. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:53

    Your Faithfully must be Yours Faithfully bro

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  8. Unknown8 February 2015 at 04:07

    Address: What?? Are you going to interview with the building?? Write the receivers name.
    Title: "A Computer Forensic Investigator" not AN.....get your vocals and consonants right.
    Content: Why On Earth Is Every Single Word Capitalized?? And How Come You Are Asking For Something That You Know?? Sentence Structure/Grammatical Errors Are Everywhere Like Mosquitoes Flying In Our Room.
    Closure: Redo the paragraph. Too Short and no mentioning about Enclosed Items (Resume/Certs).
    Signature: Yours faithfully not Your Faithfully.
    Overview: Ok But Revise For Mistakes.

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  9. norsalmina8 February 2015 at 06:06

    your name need to bold and make sure it in capital letter

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  10. intan_ahmad8 February 2015 at 06:16

    Good! just bold your name and capital letter.

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  11. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:27

    not bad...just you need capital letter and bold your name...

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  12. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:37

    please bold your name bro..

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  13. Unknown8 February 2015 at 08:05

    Bold your name ..

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  14. Unknown9 February 2015 at 00:28

    Afiq, please include the name and/or position of the person you are writing to and name of company. Overall, good job!

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  15. Unknown11 February 2015 at 09:18

    assalamualaikum apek, hehehe why your letter when every one word you use capital like "Have A Nice Day" every single words...fix it okay...hehehe by the way, have a nice day :)

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